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第一段见下边第一段描述！
只有第二段第三段模版
结合18练鲤不语18练

Given is a pie chart that clearly reveals the remarkable difference among the statistics of different recreational activities of students in a certain university.

Given is a pie chart that clearly reveals the remarkable difference among the statistics of problems in the catering industry in a certain region. In the chart, the percentage of food safety, false propaganda, unlicensed business activity, and other problems stands at 58%, 25%, 9%, and 8% respectively. It can be seen that there is a huge gap between the percentage of all the other problems and that of food safety.

Given is a bar chart that clearly reveals the remarkable change in the market shares of different brands in China’s mobile-phone market from 2000 to 2020. During this time, the percentage of Chinese mobile-phone brands’ market shares climbed rapidly from about 10% to around 60%. On the contrary, there was a rapid downward tendency in the percentage of foreign mobile-phone brands from approximately 90% to around 40%.

第二段

If you look hard enough, you will find that【 】has a …impact on 【…】 .
Two reasons can bear this out. The leading cause is that【 】，and it can account for【 】.
Secondly, when it comes to【 】，it is well known that【 】. And it can boil down to【 】.
Without doubt【 】 will exert a far-reaching/an undesirable/an unimaginable/ a disastrous effect on【 】.

第三段

Judging by what is discussed above, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that【 】.
What is to be done?
Pretty much everyone agrees on the prescription that【 】.

范文

交通拥堵

如果你观察的⾜够仔细，会发现交通拥堵对我们的⽇常⽣活有深远影响。两点原因可以解释。⾸要原因是随着⽣活⽔平的上升越来越多⼈买得起私家⻋，⽽这能解释为什么路上的⻋越来越多。其次，当提及交通拥堵时，众所周知的是公共交通不够便利也是个重要的影响因素。⽽这可以归结于城市的经济和管理⽔平。毫⽆疑问，这将对城市交通产⽣不利的影响。
根据以上所讨论的来判断，不难得出结论：我们应该想办法缓解交通拥堵。应该怎么办呢？ 很多⼈都赞成这⼀⽅案：我们应该⼤⼒发展智能交通，提⾼城市的交通管理⽔平。

If you look hard enough, you will find that traffic congestion has a far-reaching impact on our daily life.
Two reasons can bear this out.
The leading cause is that more and more people can afford private cars with the rise of living standards,
and it can account for why there are more and more cars on the road.
Secondly, when it comes to traffic jams, it is well known that the inconvenience of public transport is also an important factor.
And it can boil down to the economic and management level of the city.
Without doubt, this will exert an undesirable effect on the traffic in the city.

Judging by what is discussed above, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that we should find ways to alleviate traffic congestion.
What is to be done?
Pretty much everyone agrees on the prescription that we should develop intelligent transportation vigorously and improve the level of urban traffic management.

健康饮食

如果你观察的⾜够仔细，会发现健康饮⻝对我们的⼈⽣有深远影响。两点原因可以解释。⾸要原因是它可以让我们有更好的精⼒，⽽这能解释为什么精英⼈群更重视健康饮⻝。其次，当提及健康饮⻝时，众所周知的是我们应该减少脂肪和糖类的摄⼊。⽽这可以归结于那些由不健康的饮⻝⽅式导致的肥胖问题。毫⽆疑问，这将对个⼈健康产⽣不利的影响。
根据以上所讨论的来判断，不难得出结论：我们应该重视健康饮⻝。应该怎么办呢？ 很多⼈都赞成这⼀⽅案：我们应当控制每顿饭的分量，不能暴饮暴⻝，多吃⽔果蔬菜以及⻥类。

If you look hard enough, you will find that a healthy diet has a profound impact on our lives.
Two reasons can bear this out.
The leading cause is that such a diet can make us have better energy，
and it can account for why the elite attach more importance to healthy eating.
Secondly, when it comes to healthy eating，it is well known that we should reduce the intake of fats and sugars.
And it can boil down to obesity caused by unhealthy diets.
Without doubt, this will exert an adverse effect on personal health.

Judging by what is discussed above, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that we should lay emphasis on healthy eating.
What is to be done?
Pretty much everyone agrees on the prescription that we should control the amount of each meal and do not eat and drink too much.

第1段 开头+描述

18练-13-15之后大作文第一段

开头

特色开头-点题-50句

给出的此处填图表类型,比如柱状图清晰地展示了在⋯数据上引人注目的变化情况.
Given is a… that clearly reveals the remarkable change in the statistics of…

给出的此处填图表类型，比如柱状图清晰地展示了在…数据上引人注目的差异情况。
Given is a… that clearly reveals the remarkable difference between(2个)/among( 3个以上) the statistics of …

描述变化或趋势

数字变化

句型1

在 时间1到时间2的这段时间内，关于主题的数字/比例从数字1/比例1 上升/下降了数字2/比例2
The number/percentage of主题 climbed/declined from数字1/比例1to数字2/比例2 between时间1and时间2

句型2

时间1到时间2的这段时间,见证了关于主题的数字/比例从数字1/比例1 增长/减少到了数字2/比例2
The time between时间1and时间2 saw an increase/decrease from数字1/比例1to数字2/ 比例2 in the number/percentage of主题,

句型3 平稳

在 时间1到时间2的这段时间内,关于主题的 数字/比例基本保持不变.
The number/percentoge of 主题 remained steady between时间1and时间2

整体趋势

句型1

在时问1到时问2的这段时问内,关于主题 的数字/比例呈上升造势,从数字1/比例1上升到了数字2/比例2
There was an upward/a downward tendency in the number/percentoge of主题from数字1/比例1to数字 2/比例2 between时间1 and间/2

句型2

时间1到时间2的这段时问,见证了关于主题的数字/比例从数字1/比例1到数字2/比例2的上升/下降趋势.
The time between 时间1and 时间12 saw an upward/a downward tendency from 数字1/比例1 to 数字2/比例2 in the number/percentoge of主题.

句型3 相似/不同

关于主题的数字/比例呈现出 相似的/不同的变化趋势， 它从时间1的 数字1/比例1 变成了 时问2的数字2/比例2
A similar/diferent tendency could be found in the number/percentoge of 主题 from数字1/比例1in时间 1to数字2/比例2 in时间2

描述数值

主题1、主题2以及主题3的数字/比例分别是数字1/比例1，数字2/比例2和数字3/比例3。
The number/percentage of主题1，主题2， and 主题3 stands at 数字1/比例1，数字2/比份12，and 数字3/比例3 respectively

比较数值

比较数值1

在所有的炎别中,主题1占比最高,而 主题2占比最低.
Among the above categories, 主题1 occupies the highest proportion, while the lowest percentage is主题2.

比较数值2

可以看出,主题1和主题2的比例之间存在巨大的差距.
It can be seen that there is a huge gap between the percentage of主题1and主题2
当图表中的菜變数据之间的差免比较明显,且这个差港可以成为我们的论据时,我们才考處使用以下这个句型:
It can be seen that there is o huge gap between the percentage of主題1 and主題2

第2段 论据+论点

18练-8-10先写大作文第二段

开头句

✍🏻当你要表达重要性

毫无疑问,…是很重要的.
并且它甚至是通往…的通行证.
There is no doubt that …is of essence.
And it is even an entry ticket to…

✍🏻当你要表达危害性

没有比…更糖糕的了,
这并不是危言耸听.
There is nothing worse than…
This isn’t to be alarmist.

✍🏻当你要表达利弊

…是好坏皆有的事情。
综合来看,我认为…利大于弊
…is a mixed blessing.
All things considered, I hold the opinion that the benefits of… justify the costs.

学到这里，你肯定会好奇一件事：万一要写弊大于利呢？

…是好坏皆有的事情.
综合来看,我认为…弊大于利。
…is a mixed blessing.
All things considered, I hold the opinion that the risks of … cannot possibly justify the benefits.

✍🏻当你要表达有所发现

如果你观察的足够仔細,就会发现…都能对此证明.
If you look hard enough, you’ll find that…
… can bear this out.

✍🏻当你实在写不出论点

是什么使…?
人们观点不一.
What is it that makes…
Opinions vary.

论述 ⭐️⭐️⭐️

论述部分 这是什么 有何影响 何以见得

😉这是什么

  1. 当提及…时, 众所周知的是…

    When it comes to…, it is well known that…

  2. 什么是…？
    准确地说，它就是…

    What is …?
    Precisely speaking, the idea behind it is that …

😉有何影响

  1. …将对…产生深远的/不良的/难以想象的/灾难性的影响.

    will exert a far-reaching/undesirable/unimaginable/disastrous effect on…

  2. 如果我们对此问题熟视无睹, 则很有可能…

    If we turn a blind eye to this issue, it is very likely that…

  3. 它为…提供了一扇通向…的窗户 （它使…有机会做…）

    It gives…a window to（不定式)。

  4. …有利于…

    …go some way towards…

😉何以见得

  1. 主要原因是…， 它能解释…。

    The leading/primary cause is …, and it can account for…

  2. …有很多原因.
    一些是…,
    但…也很重要.

    …has many parents.
    Some are…（原因一）.
    But…（原因二） are also at play.

  3. 这可以归结于…

    It can boil down to(介词)..(想接动词要用ing形式、名词、从句）不要把这里的 to 当成是动词不定式啦。

  4. 举例论证:…有充分的理由, 首要的例子就是….

    The case for… has powerful backing.
    Exhibit A is that…

连接

  1. 表示转折的：

    however(然而，但是)
    on the contrary(与此相反)
    after all (毕竟)

  2. 表示列举的：

    for example(例如)
    for instance(例如)
    备注：for example 没有很多人想的那么不堪，一篇好文章是不会被这个词耽误的。一篇不好的文章，用再高级的连接词都是无用功。

  3. 表示顺序：

    to begin with(首先)
    meanwhile(与此同时)
    then(接下来，然后)

  4. 表示因果的：

    so(因此，所以)
    therefore(因此，所以)
    as a result(结果是，因此)

  5. 表示并列递进的：

    also(也)
    indeed(的确)
    above all(首先是，最重要的是)
    undoubtedly(毋庸置疑地)
    certainly(肯定地)
    surely(肯定地)
    what’s more(更重要的是)
    moreover(此外，而且)
    furthermore(此外，而且)
    to make matters worse(更糟糕的是)

  6. 短句子
    以上，就是用连接词连接的方式。但除此之外，还有一种非常实用的连接方式！ 短句子！
    比如你看我们挑出的这句话：
    如果我们对此问题熟视无睹，则很有可能使手机占用我们大量的学习时间。
    If we turn a blind eye to this issue, it is very likely that mobile phones will take up a lot of our study time.
    它的前半句是如果我们对词问题熟视无睹。因此单独看这句话，总感觉这句话没头没尾，莫名其妙。因此，我们结合句意显然应该在它之前加上个短句，来说明到底有什么问题？比如…
    手机上有太多游戏。
    There are too many games on the phone.

第3段 总结

18练-11-12再写大作文第三段

我的看法

  1. 此刻,我突然意识到…

    Now, it suddenly dawns on me that…

  2. 根据以上所讨论的來判断,不难得出结论…

    Judging by what is discussed above, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that…

我们怎么办

  1. 应该怎么办呢?很多人都赞成这一方案:

    What is to be done? Pretty much everyone agrees on the prescription that…

  2. 最显而易见的方法是…

    The most obvious way forward would be…

我的展望

  1. 总的来说,我非常相信越来越多人会接受…的价值.

    On the whole, I do believe that an increasing number of people will embrace the value of…

  2. 总的来说,我非常相信…问题一定会得到解决.

    On the whole, I do believe that the problem of…is bound to be solved.

历史

动态
从图表中可以看出，从2013年到2015年，xx发生了很大的变化。
具体来说，xx的数量增加了，从30%下降到了20%。
与此同时，xx的数量从10%上升到15%。
相比之下，这段时间xx保持稳定。
与xx相似，xx的数量也呈现上升/下降的趋势。
It is manifested in the chart that considerable changes occurred with regard to urban population from 2013 to 2015.
Specifically, there was an increase in the number of urban population,with its figure going down from 30% to 20%.
In the meantime, the number of rural population changed from 10% to 15%.
By contrast, the number of students maintain steady during this period.
Similar to rural population ,the number of urban population also demonstrated an upward/downward trend.
静态
从图表中可以看出，2013年到2015年xx方面存在着相当大的差异。
具体来说，xx的百分比达到58%，是所有类别中最高的。
其次是xx，其数字达到30%。
相比之下，其他类别分别占10%、15%和5%。
It is manifested in the chart that there exist considerable differences occurred with regard to xx from 2013 to 2015.
Specifically,the percentage of xx amounts to 58%,ranking the highest of all the categories.
Next comes xx, with its figure reaching 30%.
By contrast,the other categories amount to 10%,15% and 5% respectively.
第二段
在我看来，图表中反映的情况可以归因于很多因素，其中两个重要原因探讨如下。
一方面，经济发展在某种程度上导致了这些变化。与他们的前几代人不同，现代人的生活水平更高，因此可以xx。
另一方面，这种现象也可以用媒体施加的影响来解释。数字技术使信息传递给人们的方式多样化，以前所未有的方式塑造了人们的行为和心态。
In my view,what is reflected in the chart/ the fact that (主题： most people choose to do exercise alone) can be attributed to a host of factors,among which two essential ones are explored as follows.
On the one hand,economic advancement has, to some extent,led to these changes.Unlike their previous generations,people in modern times enjoy better living standards and can therefore /(主题：afford to buy fitness equipment and do exercise alone at home) .
On the other hand,the phenomenon can also be explained by the influence exerted by the media.Digital technology has diversified the ways that information is delivered to people,sharping their behaviors and mindsets in an unprecedented manner/ways that were never possible before.
尾段
综上所述，我们可以得出这样的结论:导致现象/xx的原因是复杂和多方面的。
我坚信这一趋势在将来几年会持续发展/持续存在（并对个人和社会都产生深远的影响）。
Based on what has been discussed above,we may safely reach the conclusion that the reasons contributing to the phenomenon/xx are complex and multifaceted.
I firmly believe that it will continue to gather momentum(适合动态图) / continue to exist(适合静态图) in the coming years and exert a far-reaching impact on the individuals as well as the whole society.

其它
数字描述
数字number 百分比percentage
其它（漫画）
This thought-provoking cartoon, I believe, will draw every reader’s attention by its startling originality.
这是一幅令人深思且创意惊人的漫画，我想想它会吸引所有读者的关注。
On the one hand, this painting is very simple, with only a few strokes, but on the other hand, it evokes my deep thoughts on the subject behind it.
一方面，这幅画非常简答，只有寥寥几笔，但是另一方面，它唤起了我对背后主题的深入思考。

余老师（未用 仅参考）
静态表格
首段
例子1
上述饼图所示为关于以下方面的调查结果：主题。其中，最重要的是A项和B项，分别占比xx%和xx%。此外，C项和D项比例是xx%和xx%。
Portrayed in the above (pie/bar/table)chart are the investigation results concerning 主题(名词短语).Among them,the most significant ones are A项 and B项，which account for A项数字 and B项数字 respectively. Besides,the percentages of C项 and D项 are C项数字 and D项数字。
例子2
如图/表所示，主题 之间存在巨大差异。根据图表数据，A项的百分比/比例/比率是所有类别中最高的。相比之下，B项和C项分别占据xx%和xx%。
It is presented/depicted in the chart that there exists a significant/striking difference in terms of 主题(名词短语).As is illustrated/revealed/suggested by the chart,the percentage/proportion/ratio of A项 is the largest/highest among all the categories. In comparison，B项andC项 take up/account for/occupy xx% and xx% respectively.
第二段
是什么导致了这些变化/这些差距呢？我想强调以下几点。首先，由于持久的经济繁荣，普通人的生活水平一直在不断的提高，这是这一现象/这一变化发生的必要先决条件。此外，随着人们的基本需求得到显著的满足，他们推动并迫使更高层次的需求出现，从而促进了这一现象/这一变化/这些变化的明显发生。最后，非常重要的是，新世纪的曙光见证了这一现象/这一变化/这些变化的普及。
what might contribute to these changes/ this phenomenon/ situation? I would like to lay emphasis on the point as follows. For a start,owing to an economic boom/the booming of the economy that is durable and lasting ,the living standards of ordinary people have been rising consistently, which turns out to ben an essential prerequisite for this phenomenon’s / this trend’s happening. what’s more /Besides/In addition, with basic needs of people significantly satisfied, they drive and force higher-level needs to emerge,thus facilitating the observable occurrence of this phenomenon/this change/these changes. Last but not least/Finally, the dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of this phenomenon /this change/these changes.(95words)
末段
静动都可：
综上所述，看到这个差异/局面我们不应该感到惊讶。可以预计这种趋势/情形在未来几年中将会持续很长一段时间。
As discussed above, it is no surprise to see this difference(静态)/situation(静动都可)，/In view of the arguments above, we can conclude that that the current phenomenon is of no surprise. And it can be predicted that the present situation will continue for quite a while in the following years.
静态：
基于以上讨论，我们可以得出这样的结论：我们所观察到的现象是经济和社会发展的自然结果。我们间隙这一现象将在今后几年继续下去。
Based on what has been discussed above/Given all arguments above, we may draw the conclusion/come to be conclusion that the phenomenon observed is the natural result of the economic and social development. I firmly believe that the phenomenon will continue in the years ahead.
动态表格
首段
根据图表数据，主题 在过去几年发生了巨大的变化。在xx年，A项数据是xxx,它处于持续地快速的增长/下降。在同一时段，然而，B项见证一段现住的增长/下降，在某年达到了xxx。
Based upon the data provide/According to the information provided by the chart,there exist(s) a striking/considerable change(s) concerning/with regard to the 主题 during the past few years. In the year of 数字年份，the number of A项 was 数字. while it went progressively up/down/rose/fell continuously. In the meantime/Meanwhile. however,the B项 has witnessed/experienced a dramatic increase/decrease/jump/decline,reaching going down to 数据 in 某年.
第二段
是什么导致了这些变化/这些差距呢？我想强调以下几点。首先，由于持久的经济繁荣，普通人的生活水平一直在不断的提高，这是这一现象/这一变化发生的必要先决条件。此外，随着人们的基本需求得到显著的满足，他们推动并迫使更高层次的需求出现，从而促进了这一现象/这一变化/这些变化的明显发生。最后，非常重要的是，新世纪的曙光见证了这一现象/这一变化/这些变化的普及。
what might contribute to these changes/ this phenomenon/ situation? I would like to lay emphasis on the point as follows. For a start,owing to an economic boom/the booming of the economy that is durable and lasting ,the living standards of ordinary people have been rising consistently, which turns out to ben an essential prerequisite for this phenomenon’s / this trend’s happening. what’s more /Besides/In addition, with basic needs of people significantly satisfied, they drive and force higher-level needs to emerge,thus facilitating the observable occurrence of this phenomenon/this change/these changes. Last but not least/Finally, the dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of this phenomenon /this change/these changes.(95words)
末段(动态)
综上所述，我们可以自信地得出结论，这种趋势将在未来几年继续存在，并对个人和整个社会产生深远的影响。
Taking into account all the factors discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that trend observed will continue in the coming years and exert far-reaching effect on the individuals as well as the whole society.
Considering all the points discussed above, we can naturally come to the conclusion that the trend demonstrated in the chart will definitely sustain in the forthcoming future.