大作文

第一段

第1句

Given is a pie chart that clearly reveals the remarkable difference among the statistics of different recreational activities of students in a certain university.
Given is a pie chart that clearly reveals the remarkable difference among the statistics of problems in the catering industry in a certain region.
Given is a pie chart that clearly reveals the remarkable difference among students’ concepts of time in a certain university.

Given is a line chart that clearly reveals the remarkable change in the number of domestic physical exercise participants and the size of the sports market in China.
Given is a line chart that clearly reveals the remarkable change in the statistics of practitioners and market size in China’s livestreaming e-commerce industry.
Given is a bar chart that clearly reveals the remarkable change in the market shares of different brands in China’s mobile-phone market from 2000 to 2020.
Given is a bar chart that clearly reveals the remarkable change in total excessive consumption and the number of people who spend money in advance in a certain country.

第2句

Pie The percentage of students who are punctual, occasionally late, often late and never pay attention to the problem of being late stands at 63%, 22.6%, 7.8%, and 6.6% respectively.
Line The number of people taking part in physical exercise climbed from 0.37 billion to 0.435 billion between 2011 and 2020.
Line The amount of market size in this industry climbed from 36.6 billion to 1.995 trillion between 2017 and 2021.
Bar The total excessive consumption climbed from 15.37 trillion to 49.57 trillion between 2014 and 2020.

第3句

Meanwhile, there was also an upward/downward tendency in the size of the sports market from 600 billion to 1500 billion.
Meanwhile, there was also an upward tendency in the number of people spending money in advance from 38 million to 0.23 billion.
Meanwhile, there was also an upward tendency in the number of people who work in this industry from 2.56 million to 10.32 million.

第二段&第三段

文字、思路提醒

健康饮⻝
如果你观察的⾜够仔细，会发现健康饮⻝对我们的⼈⽣有深远影响。
两点原因可以解释。
⾸要原因是它可以让我们有更好的精⼒，⽽这能解释为什么精英⼈群更重视健康饮⻝。
其次，当提及健康饮⻝时，众所周知的是我们应该减少脂肪和糖类的摄⼊。
⽽这可以归结于那些由不健康的饮⻝⽅式导致的肥胖问题。毫⽆疑问，这将对个⼈健康产⽣不利的影响。
根据以上所讨论的来判断，不难得出结论：我们应该重视健康饮⻝。
应该怎么办呢？ 很多⼈都赞成这⼀⽅案：我们应当控制每顿饭的分量，不能暴饮暴⻝，多吃⽔果蔬菜以及⻥类。

交通拥堵
如果你观察的⾜够仔细，会发现交通拥堵对我们的⽇常⽣活有深远影响。
两点原因可以解释。
⾸要原因是随着⽣活⽔平的上升越来越多⼈买得起私家⻋，⽽这能解释为什么路上的⻋越来越多。
其次，当提及交通拥堵时，众所周知的是公共交通不够便利也是个重要的影响因素。
⽽这可以归结于城市的经济和管理⽔平。 毫⽆疑问，这将对城市交通产⽣不利的影响。
根据以上所讨论的来判断，不难得出结论：我们应该想办法缓解交通拥堵。
应该怎么办呢？ 很多⼈都赞成这⼀⽅案：我们应该⼤⼒发展智能交通，提⾼城市的交通管理⽔平。

⽬标
如果你观察的⾜够仔细，会发现⽬标对我们的成功有深远影响。
两点原因可以解释。
⾸要原因是⽬标可以给我们动⼒，⽽这能解释为什么有⽬标感的⼈更容易实现⽬标。
其次，当提及⽬标时，众所周知的是它可以帮助我们度过困难。⽽这可以归结于⽬标带给⼈的⾃信和雄⼼。
毫⽆疑问，⽬标将对每个⼈的⼈⽣产⽣积极的影响。
根据以上所讨论的来判断，不难得出结论：我们应该拥有明确的⽬标。
应该怎么办呢？
很多⼈都赞成这⼀⽅案：关键在于把⽬标具体化。

注意的语法

the 特指，范围则不适用
attach importance to 是一个常用的固定搭配，表示给予某事物重要性或关注。
have better energy 有更好的精力 不要加a
healthy eating更通用，可以表示一般的健康饮食习惯，而 the healthy eating 可能更侧重于特定的、被定义或推荐的健康饮食方式。在大多数情况下，我们更倾向于使用 healthy eating 来表示广义上的健康饮食。
reduce the intake of fats and sugars. ，我添加了 the 来指明特定的脂肪和糖分，使句子更加流畅。这是一个更常见的表达方式，也更符合英语表达习惯。
this will exert an adverse effect别忘了写 on personal healthy.

第二段

  • If you look hard enough, you will find that【 】.
    • that a healthy diet has a profound impact on our lives.
    • that traffic congestion has a far-reaching impact on our daily life.
    • that goals have a far-reaching impact on our success.
  • Two reasons can bear this out.
  • The leading cause is 【 】，逗号
    • that such a diet can make us have better energy，
    • that more and more people can afford private cars with the rise of living standards,
    • that aims give us motivation,
  • and it can account for【 】.
    • why the elite attach more importance to healthy eating.
    • why there are more and more cars on the road.
    • why people with the sense of purpose are more likely to achieve their goals.
  • Secondly, when it comes to【 】，逗号
    • healthy eating，
    • traffic jams,
    • goals，
  • it is well known that【 】.
    • it is well known that we should reduce the intake of fats and sugars.
    • it is well known that the inconvenience of public transport is also an important factor.
    • it is well known that they can help us weather difficulties.
  • And it can boil down to【 】.
    • obesity caused by unhealthy diets.
    • the economic and management level of the city.
    • the confidence and ambition that goals bring.
  • Without doubt,【 】 will exert a far-reaching/undesirable/unimaginable/disastrous effect on【 】.
    • this will exert an adverse effect on personal health.
    • this will exert an undesirable effect on the traffic in the city.
    • purposes will exert a positive effect on everyone’s life.

第三段

  • Judging by what is discussed above, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that【 】.
    • that we should lay emphasis on healthy eating.
    • that we should find ways to alleviate traffic congestion.
    • that we should have clear goals.
  • What is to be done?
  • Pretty much everyone agrees on the prescription(way/method/solution/suggestion) that【 】.
    • that we should control the amount of each meal and do not eat and drink too much.
    • that we should develop intelligent transportation vigorously and improve the level of urban traffic management.
    • the key is to specify your goals.

例文

If you look hard enough, you will find that a healthy diet has a profound impact on our lives.
Two reasons can bear this out.
The leading cause is that such a diet can make us have better energy，and it can account for why the elite attach more importance to healthy eating.
Secondly, when it comes to healthy eating，it is well known that we should reduce the intake of fats and sugars.
And it can boil down to obesity caused by unhealthy diets.
Without doubt, this will exert an adverse effect on personal health.
Judging by what is discussed above, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that we should lay emphasis on healthy eating.
What is to be done? Pretty much everyone agrees on the prescription that we should control the amount of each meal and do not eat and drink too much.

If you look hard enough, you will find that traffic congestion has a far-reaching impact on our daily life.
Two reasons can bear this out.
The leading cause is that more and more people can afford private cars with the rise of living standards, and it can account for why there are more and more cars on the road.
Secondly, when it comes to traffic jams, it is well known that the inconvenience of public transport is also an important factor.
And it can boil down to the economic and management level of the city. Without doubt, this will exert an undesirable effect on the traffic in the city.
Judging by what is discussed above, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that we should find ways to alleviate traffic congestion.
What is to be done? Pretty much everyone agrees on the prescription that we should develop intelligent transportation vigorously and improve the level of urban traffic management.

If you look hard enough, you will find that goals have a far-reaching impact on our success.
Two reasons can bear this out.
The leading cause is that aims give us motivation, and it can account for why people with the sense of purpose are more likely to achieve their goals.
Secondly, when it comes to goals，it is well known that they can help us weather difficulties.
And it can boil down to the confidence and ambition that goals bring.
Without doubt, purposes will exert a positive effect on everyone’s life.
Judging by what is discussed above, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that we should have clear goals.
What is to be done?
Pretty much everyone agrees on the prescription that the key is to specify your goals.

小作文

第一段

  • 开头
    • Dear Sir Or Madam,
    • Dear Smith,
  • I am writing this email/letter to
    • apologize for not coming to your house to watch the World Cup tomorrow night
    • complain about the book that I bought on your website
    • give you some advice on studying in Beijing
  • and to express
    • my guilt.
    • my strong dissatisfaction.
    • my welcome.

🤔说点实的部分
申请某事物 apply for…
从…(职位)辞职 resign from…
给某人推荐…recommend sth. to sb.
咨询某事 consult about…
为…给某人道歉 apologize to sb. for…
感谢… thank you for…
为/给…提一些建议 make some suggestions about…/offer sb. some advice on…
投诉… complain about…
邀请某人做某事 invite sb. to do…
通知某人某事 inform sb. about…
答复某人/某事… reply to sb./sth.

🤔说点虚的部分
我诚挚的歉意 my sincere apology
感谢 gratitude(对某人的感谢，介词用 to；对某事的感谢，介词用 for)
我强烈的期待 my strong expectation(对…的期待，介词用 of)
内疚 guilt
我对…强烈的喜爱 my strong love for…
我对…强烈的兴趣 my great interest in…
祝贺 congratulations(对…的感谢，介词用 on)
喜悦 delight(对…的喜悦，介词用 at)
欢迎 welcome
失望 disappointment
遗憾 regret
不满 dissatisfaction
看法 thought(可数)(关于…的看法，介词用 on)
我对…的深切慰问 my deepest sympathies over… (对某人的慰问，介词用 to；对某事的慰问，介词用 over)

第二段

  • Specifically, my ideas with regard to 【 】 are as follows.
    • choosing a school
    • this matter
  • To begin with, I hope/think/find/want【 】
    • Chinese courses are offered for French students at Peking University and it will help you integrate into China better.
    • many parts of the book had been damaged and that had affected t reading.
  • and it can/will/make/help【 】
    • it will help you integrate into China better.
    • that had affected my reading.
  • Secondly，
    • you once said that you like Chinese history very much.
    • you promised that the book would be the latest edition, but what I received was an old one.
    • the game will be replayed in your favorite bar the day after tomorrow.
  • Consequently,
    • I highly recommend Peking University to you because of its perfect history subject.
    • this Was a very bad shopping experience.
    • I would like to invite you to the bar the day after tomorrow to watch the match with a drink.

第三段 任选俩

  • I am grateful for your time and patience.

  • I am looking forward to your prompt response.

  • I am looking forward to your handling.

  • I hope the above suggestions are of benefit to you.

  • If I can be of any assistance in any way, please contact me at any time.

  • If I can help you, please contact me at any time.

  • Wish you a bright future.

例文

建议信

Dear Tom,
I am writing this letter to give you some advice on studying in Beijing and to express my welcome.
Specifically, my ideas with regard to choosing a school are as follows.
To begin with, I found that Chinese courses are offered for French students at Peking University and it will help you integrate into China better.
Secondly, you once said that you like Chinese history very much.
Consequently, I highly recommend Peking University to you because of its perfect history subject.
I hope the above suggestions are of benefit to you. IfI can be of any assistance in any way, please contact me at any time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

投诉

Dear Sir or Madam,
As a customer of your store, I am writing this letter to complain about the book that I bought on your website and to express my strong dissatisfaction.
Specifically, reasons abounding for my complaint are as follows.
To begin with, I found that many parts of the book had been damaged and that had affected my reading.
Secondly, you promised that the book would be the latest edition, but what I received was an old one.
Consequently, this Was a very bad shopping experience.
I am looking forward to your handling. If I can be of any assistance in any way, please contact me at any time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

道歉信

题目： 假如你是 Li Ming，原本约好和同事 Smith 明晚去他家去看足球比赛，但你突然接到公司的电话，需要你明天回公司接收一份文件。请写封邮件（e-mail）向 Smith 致歉。

Dear Smith,
I am writing this email to apologize for not coming to your house to watch the World Cup tomorrow night and to express my guilt.
Specifically, my ideas with regard to this matter are as follows.
To begin with, I just received a call from my company asking me to go back to receive an important document as soon as possible, which forced me to rush back to the company.
Secondly, the game will be replayed in your favorite bar the day after tomorrow.
Consequently, I would like to invite you to the bar the day after tomorrow to watch the match with a drink.
I am grateful for your time and patience. I am looking forward to your prompt response.
句尾 Yours sincerely,
句尾 Li Ming

Notice

Notice
句尾 December 30th. 2022
In order to improve the experience of using the swimming pool, we have intended to close it temporarily.
Specifically, reasons abounding for closing the pool are as follows. To begin with, we plan to replace the air conditioning in the pool, and it will enable the pool to operate normally in the cold winter. Secondly, many students suggest that some washing devices should be added. And we really agree with that advice. Consequently, we are going to build a new area for washing.
Please pay much attention to this notice. For more detailed information, you can contact the swimming pool.
句尾 The School Swimming Pool

从句写法

the fact that

将 the fact that 转化为万能句型时，可以使用 the idea that 或者 the notion that 来达到类似的表达效果。这两个短语在句子结构中可以替代 the fact that，使得句子更加灵活。

句子示例：The fact that she arrived early pleased everyone.

可以改写为：

  1. The idea that she arrived early pleased everyone.
  2. The notion that she arrived early pleased everyone.

在这两个新的句子中，the idea that 和 the notion that 分别替代了 the fact that 的位置，而句子的核心结构和含义保持一致。

句子成分分析：以第一个改写后的句子为例：The idea that she arrived early pleased everyone.

  • The idea: 主语，引入了一个思想或概念。
  • that she arrived early: 定语从句，修饰 the idea，说明了具体的内容。
  • pleased: 谓语动词，表示主语的动作或状态。
  • everyone: 宾语，接受动作的对象。

这样，整个句子在结构上仍然保持了 the fact that 的语境，但通过改用不同的短语，使得句子更富有变化和表达的灵活性。

从句后边为什么可以直接接动词或着句子

从句之所以可以直接接动词或句子，与其在句子中扮演的语法角色有关。
有三种主要类型的从句：名词性从句、形容词性从句和副词性从句。
下面通过例子来解释这一现象，同时分析句子成分和主谓宾结构。

  1. 名词性从句： 名词性从句在句子中充当名词的角色，可以作为主语、宾语或表语。

    • 例子1（作为主语）： What he said surprised everyone.
      • 句子成分分析： What he said 在这里作为主语，整个从句是名词性从句，充当主语的位置。
      • 主谓宾结构： 主语是 What he said，谓语是 surprised，没有直接宾语。
    • 例子2（作为宾语）： I don’t know where she is going.
      • 句子成分分析： Where she is going 在这里作为宾语，整个从句是名词性从句，充当宾语的位置。
      • 主谓宾结构： 主语是 I，谓语是 know，宾语是 where she is going。

  2. 形容词性从句： 形容词性从句在句子中充当形容词的角色，修饰名词。

    • 例子： The book that is on the table belongs to me.
      • 句子成分分析： That is on the table 在这里作为形容词性从句，修饰名词 book。
      • 主谓宾结构： 主语是 The book，谓语是 belongs，宾语是 that is on the table。

  3. 副词性从句： 副词性从句在句子中充当副词的角色，修饰动词、形容词或副词。

    • 例子1： She sings, as if she were an angel.
      • 句子成分分析： As if she were an angel 在这里作为副词性从句，修饰动词 sings。
      • 主谓宾结构： 主语是 She，谓语是 sings，没有直接宾语。
    • 例子2： He works hard, so that he can achieve his goals.
      • 句子成分分析： So that he can achieve his goals 在这里作为副词性从句，修饰动词 works。
      • 主谓宾结构： 主语是 He，谓语是 works，没有直接宾语。

总体来说，从句之所以能直接接动词或句子，取决于从句在句子结构中所起的具体语法作用。主谓宾结构则根据句子的具体内容来确定主语、谓语和宾语。

that 从句

That 从句通常用来引导一个从属子句，进一步说明主句中的内容。这种从句可以是名词性从句、形容词性从句或副词性从句。以下是关于 that 从句的不同用法，并附有相应的例句和句子成分分析。

  1. 名词性从句：That 从句在句子中充当名词的角色，可以作为主语、宾语或表语。

    • 作为主语：
      • 例句： That she didn’t show up disappointed everyone.
      • 句子成分分析： That she didn’t show up 在这里作为整个主语，引入一个事实或情况。
    • 作为宾语：
      • 例句： I believe that you will succeed.
      • 句子成分分析： that you will succeed 在这里作为整个宾语，说明了相信的具体内容。
    • 作为表语：
      • 例句： His dream is that he can travel the world.
      • 句子成分分析： that he can travel the world 在这里作为整个表语，说明了梦想的具体内容。

  2. 形容词性从句：That 从句在句子中充当形容词的角色，修饰名词。

    • 例句： I have a friend that speaks five languages.
    • 句子成分分析： that speaks five languages 修饰名词 friend，说明了这个朋友的具体特征。

  3. 副词性从句：That 从句在句子中充当副词的角色，修饰动词、形容词或副词。

    • 例句： She works so hard that she often forgets to eat.
    • 句子成分分析： that she often forgets to eat 在这里修饰动词 works，说明了工作努力的程度。

以上例句和分析展示了 that 从句在不同语境下的用法和句子成分。

从句

从句是在句子中起到修饰、说明或补充主句意思的句子结构。从句分为三种主要类型：名词性从句、形容词性从句和副词性从句。以下是对这三种从句的简要说明，以及每一种类型的造句和句子成分分析。

  1. 名词性从句：名词性从句在句子中充当名词的角色，可以作为主语、宾语或表语。
    • 造句： What he said surprised everyone.
    • 句子成分分析： What he said 在这里作为整个主语，引入一个事件或情况。
    • 造句： I don’t know where she is going.
    • 句子成分分析： where she is going 在这里作为整个宾语，说明了不知道的具体地点。
  2. 形容词性从句：形容词性从句在句子中充当形容词的角色，修饰名词。
    • 造句： The book that is on the table belongs to me.
    • 句子成分分析： that is on the table 修饰名词 book，说明了书的具体位置。
    • 造句： She sings as if she were an angel.
    • 句子成分分析： as if she were an angel 在这里修饰动词 sings，说明了她唱歌的方式。
    • 造句： He works hard so that he can achieve his goals.
    • 句子成分分析： so that he can achieve his goals 在这里修饰副词 works，说明了工作的目的。

这些例句和分析展示了从句在不同语境下的用法以及在句子结构中的不同作用。

状语从句

状语从句是一种在句子中充当状语的从句结构，用来说明主句的时间、地点、原因、条件、方式等情况。以下是关于状语从句的说明，以及每一种类型的造句和句子成分分析。

  1. 时间状语从句：时间状语从句用来说明主句发生的时间。

    • 造句： When the sun sets, the stars become visible.
    • 句子成分分析： When the sun sets 在这里作为时间状语，说明了星星变得可见的具体时间。

  2. 地点状语从句：地点状语从句用来说明主句发生的地点。

    • 造句： Wherever you go, I will follow.
    • 句子成分分析： Wherever you go 在这里作为地点状语，说明了跟随发生的地点。

  3. 原因状语从句：原因状语从句用来说明主句发生的原因。

    • 造句： Because it was raining, the picnic was canceled.
    • 句子成分分析： Because it was raining 在这里作为原因状语，说明了野餐取消的原因。

  4. 条件状语从句：条件状语从句用来说明主句发生的条件。

    • 造句： If you study hard, you will pass the exam.
    • 句子成分分析： If you study hard 在这里作为条件状语，说明了通过考试的条件。

  5. 方式状语从句：方式状语从句用来说明主句发生的方式或方式。

    • 造句： He completed the task as if he were a professional.
    • 句子成分分析： As if he were a professional 在这里作为方式状语，说明了完成任务的方式。